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Orbital

Chapter 2 · Orbit 1, into orbit 2

Summary

Ground control teases the crew after a moon-bound mission overtakes their station, making them feel like “yesterday’s news,” while Chie quietly thinks of her dead mother and the earth below. The chapter lingers on the astronauts’ hard daily exercise, their struggle against microgravity, and the strange peace of orbit. As they circle the planet, time feels broken into a “dayless freak zone,” and Chie wishes she could stay in space forever, where grief and return cannot touch her.

Key Events

  1. Ground control taunts the crew with the moon mission and the lunar astronauts’ “suited-booted glory,” and Pietro answers with a joke, while Chie thinks of her dead mother on Earth.
  2. Anton struggles with jet-lagged sleep and gazes out at the stars, feeling the moon’s nearness and hoping one day to reach it himself.
  3. The crew force their bodies into daily exercise, using bikes, treadmills and weights to resist microgravity and keep themselves ready for return to Earth.
  4. The astronauts realise that orbit has made “home” expand into the station itself, so they treat one another as family and long only for the windowed view and the station’s “continuous hum.”
  5. Space disrupts ordinary time as sixteen sunrises and nights race past, and the crew see the planet below as one borderless whole, with countries, cities and oceans slipping by beneath them.

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